Essay Review & Feedback

Get a Fresh Take.

Already have a draft? Send it my way. I’ll bring fresh eyes, thoughtful feedback, and clear direction while keeping your voice unmistakably yours.

A college essay draft marked up with written feedback

Fresh Eyes

One review • $125

A single, thorough read of your completed draft with clear next steps.

•One comprehensive Google Docs review with in-line comments and questions
•End notes highlighting priorities and concrete next steps
•Actionable feedback on story, structure, clarity, and voice
•Additional reviews available at a reduced price

Prefer to talk it through?

A phone or video call to discuss your essay can be arranged too. Calls are billed at the coaching hourly rate.

Ready to begin?

Submit your draft.

Payment is collected before the review begins — you'll receive an invoice by email once your draft is received.

Student Name *

Student Email *

Parent Email (optional)

Student Phone *

Essay prompt *

Word Count Max *

This essay is for

General essayA specific target school

Unweighted GPA *

Weighted GPA (optional)

SAT score (optional)

ACT score (optional)

What aspects of yourself are you hoping to highlight with this piece? *

Anything else I should know? (interests, extracurriculars, anything helpful as I review)

Upload your draft *

PDF, Word, or plain text. Max 15 MB.

Attach a supporting document (optional)

Resume, activities list, "get to know me" doc — anything already written that gives helpful context. Max 15 MB.

I'd prefer to talk this through by phone or video.

You'll receive an invoice by email shortly. Your review will begin once payment has been received and all materials are submitted. Feedback is typically returned within 1-3 business days from that point.

FAQ

Common questions

What is essay review versus essay coaching?

Essay review is focused feedback on a draft you've already written. Essay coaching is the full brainstorm-through-final process. Many students use both — coaching for the personal statement and reviews for supplements.

Do you edit or rewrite my essay?

I give clear, specific feedback and suggested revisions. The words stay yours. My goal is to make your voice sharper, not replace it.

How fast is turnaround?

Most reviews are returned within 3 to 5 days. Rush turnaround is available near deadlines.

Can I get more than one review?

Yes. A single review is $125. If you'd like more feedback after revising, additional reviews are available at a reduced price.

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